Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cose-x509-07
review-ietf-cose-x509-07-genart-lc-gurbani-2020-09-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cose-x509
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-10-01
Requested 2020-09-17
Authors Jim Schaad
Draft last updated 2020-09-18
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Vijay Gurbani
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Charlie Kaufman
Iotdir Telechat review of -07 by Carsten Bormann
Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-cose-x509-07-genart-lc-gurbani-2020-09-18
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Cq2wcSpkRkhR1PaL71kdx7JOkZQ
Reviewed rev. 07
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2020-09-18

Review
review-ietf-cose-x509-07-genart-lc-gurbani-2020-09-18

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Document: draft-ietf-cose-x509-07
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2020-09-18
IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication with nits.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 5

(Sn refers to Section n)
- S1: s/ad decided/and decided/
- S1: s/Since that time a/Since that time, a/
- S1: s/in the 6TiSCH environment [I-D.richardson-enrollment-roadmap], describes/in the 6TiSCH environment, [I-D.richardson-enrollment-roadmap] describes/
- S1: "A third scenario..." The wording seemed odd since there is no text that sets the expectation that there will be three scenarios for discussion.  If your intent is to enumerate the different scenarios, probably best to prepare the reader for this ahead of time.
- S2: s/which it can then provide to/that it subsequently provides to/