Last Call Review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-
review-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-genart-lc-even-2011-11-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-04
Requested 2011-11-01
Authors Sheng Jiang , Sean Shen
I-D last updated 2011-11-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Roni Even
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Steve Hanna
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
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Document:

draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2011–10–30

IETF LC End Date: 2011–11–4

IESG Telechat date:



Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC.



Major issues:



I do not have any editorial issues but I am not sure about the value of the
document. I saw the IESG evaluation record

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps/ballot/

  and did not see any value with repeating the comments. So if the discuss are
  resolved the draft can be published. This is the reason that I summarized it
  as almost ready for publication.



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