Last Call Review of draft-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die-05
review-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-04-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-04-24 | |
| Requested | 2018-03-27 | |
| Authors | Benjamin Kaduk , Michiko Short | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-04-26 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -03
by Joel Jaeggli
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tero Kivinen Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-04-26 |
review-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-04-26-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-curdle-des-des-des-die-die-die-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-04-18 IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-24 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as BCP RFC but has some nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], "prevalance"--->"prevalence" -[Page 5], "implementions"--->"implementations" -[Page 5], "aministrators"--->"administrators" -[Page 7], "accelleration"--->"acceleration" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com