Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dane-ops-14
review-ietf-dane-ops-14-genart-telechat-davies-2015-09-21-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dane-ops |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-08-03 | |
Requested | 2015-07-02 | |
Authors | Viktor Dukhovni , Wes Hardaker | |
I-D last updated | 2015-09-21 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -12
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -14 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Fred Baker (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-dane-ops by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 16) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2015-09-21 |
review-ietf-dane-ops-14-genart-telechat-davies-2015-09-21-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-dane-ops-14.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2015/08/02 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2015/08/06 Summary: Ready with nits. This version clears up most of the issues that I had with -12 except that I am slightly wary of the extensive usage of RFC 2118 keywords in contexts that appear to be operational guidance and may not be enforceable by implementations of the basic DANE protocol. There are a couple of left over and/or introduced nits that didn't get fixed from -13 to -14. Major issues: Minor issues: I am not totally convinced about the remaining usage of RFC 2118 keywords, but I'll leave that for the ADs to consider. Nits/editorial comments: There are a couple of nits introduced by the edits (or left over from the previous version): s3, para 2: s/ When a servers does/When a server does/, s/SHOULD respond/the server SHOULD respond/ s8, para 3, last sentence: s/the only other/The only other/ s10.1, next to last para: s/as when significantly/as the full certificates are significantly/ s12, bullet 4: s/to processes extended/to process extended/ s14, last para: s/PKIX-TA(0(/PKIX-TA(0)/