Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03
review-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03-secdir-lc-gondrom-2014-01-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2014-01-23
Requested 2014-01-16
Authors Ólafur Guðmundsson
Draft last updated 2014-01-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tobias Gondrom
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03-secdir-lc-gondrom-2014-01-30
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 04)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2014-01-30
review-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03-secdir-lc-gondrom-2014-01-30-00


I have reviewed this document as part of the
      security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
      being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written
      primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. 
      Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
      like any other last call comments.








      The document is basically just about acronyms to simplify DANE
      conversations 




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          document appears ready for publication. 







The security consideration
            section is sufficient and there are no security issues with
            this document. 





        There are only two small nits / spelling issues: 


        in section "Abstract":


        - s/Experience has show that/Experience has shown that


        - speaking of acronyms, the first mention of TLSA should spell
        it out. 





        Thank you and best regards. 





        Tobias