Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04
review-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04-secdir-lc-lonvick-2020-03-20-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2020-03-13 | |
Requested | 2020-02-28 | |
Authors | Balazs Varga , János Farkas , Lou Berger , Andrew G. Malis , Stewart Bryant | |
I-D last updated | 2020-03-20 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -03
by Sasha Vainshtein
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Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Chris M. Lonvick (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Chris M. Lonvick |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/MYXBv1XAh52QqxA2bqqywKNqmVk | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
Result | Has issues | |
Completed | 2020-03-13 |
review-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04-secdir-lc-lonvick-2020-03-20-00
Hello, I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. The summary of the review is Ready with Issues. The only reason I add the "with Issues" caveat is that the Security Considerations section broadly defers to I-D.ietf-detnet-security. The Security Considerations section of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework additionally provides some comments that are specific to the draft. I found those to be well thought out and appropriate. I skimmed I-D.ietf-detnet-security and found it to also be well thought out. The threat model was clear and understandable and the document appeared to appropriately address the threat analysis. I would give draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework an unqualified Ready, as soon as I-D.ietf-detnet-security is reviewed and becomes an RFC. Regards, Chris