Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05-genart-lc-kyzivat-2021-02-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-02-05 | |
| Requested | 2021-01-22 | |
| Authors | Balazs Varga , János Farkas , Andrew G. Malis , Stewart Bryant | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-02-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -05
by Russ White
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Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Genart Last Call review of -05 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -05 by Tim Chown (diff) Iotdir Telechat review of -06 by Niklas Widell (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Paul Kyzivat |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/UJuIzJhoxHYVR8nXJjORIvjnv-Q | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-02-03 |
review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05-genart-lc-kyzivat-2021-02-03-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2021-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. General: I'm unqualified to meaningfully comment on the technical quality of this document. I've reviewed it for form. Issues: Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 1) NIT: Unlinked references In section 1 paragraph 2, and section 3 paragraph 1, there are references to [RFC8939] that are not linked. 2) NIT: From IdNits IdNits reports: == Outdated reference: A later version (-14) exists of draft-ietf-detnet-security-12 There are a couple of other warnings, but they are spurious.