Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05-rtgdir-lc-white-2021-01-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2021-01-22
Requested 2021-01-04
Requested by Deborah Brungard
Authors Balazs Varga , János Farkas , Andrew G. Malis , Stewart Bryant
I-D last updated 2021-01-18
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Russ White (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -05 by Tim Chown (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -06 by Niklas Widell (diff)
Comments 
Prep for Last Call
Assignment Reviewer Russ White
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/VBj1YppHD7fMzScH9BEglYMjyE4
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Has nits
Completed 2021-01-18
review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05-rtgdir-lc-white-2021-01-18-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
Reviewer: Russ White
Review Date: 18 Jan 2021
IETF LC End Date: 22 Jan 2021
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:

This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
considered prior to publication.

Comments:

This draft is well written and contains use cases and information on supporting
those use cases for IP over time sensitive networking.

Major Issues:

No major issues found.

Minor Issues:

No minor issues found.

Nits:

One small nit.

==
TSN capabilities of the TSN sub-network are made available for IP  (DetNet)
flows via the protocol interworking function desribed

desribed/described
==

This is good work -- thanks!

:-) /r