Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08
review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08-genart-lc-halpern-2023-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-12-22
Requested 2023-12-08
Authors Balazs Varga , János Farkas , Andrew G. Malis
I-D last updated 2023-12-19
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -09 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Olivier Bonaventure (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Bruno Decraene (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/mjG8pykkgdMPsjr3JbMm0qE86UA
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-12-19
review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08-genart-lc-halpern-2023-12-19-00
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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2023-12-19
IETF LC End Date: 2023-12-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    The term PREOF is used without any expansion or definition in the
    introduction.  Some elaboration of the term should be included at first
    usage. It may make sense to define F-label even though all the references
    to it in this document are saying that it is not used.  As a reader, I was
    left inferring what was not being done.