Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06
review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06-tsvart-lc-ott-2020-09-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2020-09-10
Requested 2020-08-27
Authors Balazs Varga, János Farkas, Lou Berger, Andy Malis, Stewart Bryant
Draft last updated 2020-09-10
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Harish Sitaraman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joerg Ott 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06-tsvart-lc-ott-2020-09-10
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/a5d2eA2HqgSdJGJ4CkFLK2s_-8E
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-09-10

Review
review-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06-tsvart-lc-ott-2020-09-10

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
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The document defines the transmission and reception behaviour as well as
the configuration information for encapsulating DetNet MPLS packets over UDP.
The draft provides an explicit applicability statement concerning carrying
non-congestion controlled traffic.

With the latter in mind, the document seems to be complete.
(Fragmentation and reassembly seem to be already covered with MPLS-over-UDP
in RFC7510 and RFC4023)

One quick question to the authors:
Section 5 provides the necessary information to be configured for flow mapping
and makes reference to IP source and destination addresses. Is the presence of
network (and port) address translation devices/functions covered elsewhere in
the many specs to ensure proper transmission at a sender and proper reverse
mapping at a receiver? It would be up to the control plane to determine the
appropriate addresses. Does this need explicit mentioning?

Best,
Jörg