Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06
review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-10-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-10-03
Requested 2018-09-19
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Ines Robles (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Shwetha Bhandari
Review review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-10-02
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/MHrlXODetKkLWuZFBG97SulBYWw
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-10-02
Review completed: 2018-10-02

Review
review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-10-02

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary:
This is a problem statement draft for deterministic networks. This draft documents the requirements to establish
 multi-hop paths for flows that need deterministic network services with latency guarantees and ultra-low
 packet loss.
While there is no dedicated Manageability Consideration section, Section 3.3 of  the draft lists requirements and recommends DetNet to produce a  high level interaction and data models that cover the manageability and operational considerations.