Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06
review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-10-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-10-03
Requested 2018-09-19
Authors Norman Finn , Pascal Thubert
I-D last updated 2018-10-02
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Ines Robles (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Matthew A. Miller (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shwetha Bhandari
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-10-02
review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-06-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-10-02-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary:
This is a problem statement draft for deterministic networks. This draft
documents the requirements to establish
 multi-hop paths for flows that need deterministic network services with
 latency guarantees and ultra-low packet loss.
While there is no dedicated Manageability Consideration section, Section 3.3 of
 the draft lists requirements and recommends DetNet to produce a  high level
interaction and data models that cover the manageability and operational
considerations.