Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-03
Requested 2018-09-19
Authors Norman Finn, Pascal Thubert
Draft last updated 2018-10-25
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Ines Robles (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Matthew Miller
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07-genart-lc-miller-2018-10-25
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-10-25


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Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
Review Date: 2018-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03
IESG Telechat date: N/A


Ready to publish as an Informational Draft, though there are nits
that ought to be addressed before publication.

Major issues:  NONE

Minor issues:  NONE

Nits/editorial comments:

* In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "an"
should be "an" in the phrase "a tunnel between and ingress and an
egress router".

* In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "of"
should be "or" in the phrase "... the path is end-to-end of a