Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07
review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07-genart-lc-miller-2018-10-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-03
Requested 2018-09-19
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Matthew Miller
Review review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07-genart-lc-miller-2018-10-25
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/55fyxnN8gkwTe8QMFEiDzgeFw3o
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-10-25
Review completed: 2018-10-25

Review
review-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07-genart-lc-miller-2018-10-25

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Document: 
Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
Review Date: 2018-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary:

Ready to publish as an Informational Draft, though there are nits
that ought to be addressed before publication.

Major issues:  NONE

Minor issues:  NONE

Nits/editorial comments:

* In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "an"
should be "an" in the phrase "a tunnel between and ingress and an
egress router".

* In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "of"
should be "or" in the phrase "... the path is end-to-end of a
tunnel.".