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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11
review-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11-dnsdir-lc-reid-2024-04-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2024-04-30
Requested 2024-04-16
Authors Warren "Ace" Kumari , Suresh Krishnan , Rajiv Asati , Lorenzo Colitti , Jen Linkova , Sheng Jiang
I-D last updated 2024-04-30
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -12 by Jim Reid (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -11 by Jim Reid (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Niclas Comstedt (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jim Reid
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/FPa3AGnyP7tIiZ5zWWvARMTfXBU
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-04-30
review-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11-dnsdir-lc-reid-2024-04-30-00
The I-D is nearly ready and most of my earlier review comments have been
satisfactorily addressed by the authors.

One problem remains IMO. Section 6 still mentions ownership of an IP address.
This is wrong. It's also inappropriate language for an IETF standards document.
IP addresses are not property and therefore they cannot be owned.

I suggest changing

"This prevents a host from registering an address owned by another host."

to

"This prevents a host from registering an address already used by (or assigned
to) another host."