Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11
review-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11-genart-lc-knodel-2024-05-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-04-30
Requested 2024-04-16
Authors Warren "Ace" Kumari , Suresh Krishnan , Rajiv Asati , Lorenzo Colitti , Jen Linkova , Sheng Jiang
I-D last updated 2024-05-07
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -12 by Jim Reid (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -11 by Jim Reid (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Niclas Comstedt (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mallory Knodel
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/52kPPhhLfjhjSZpPp6Mrg1wYwaw
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-05-07
review-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11-genart-lc-knodel-2024-05-07-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2024-05-07
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-30
IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16

Summary: This document is well written and clear.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements:

s/re-start/restart
s/IA-Address/IA Address