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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05
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Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-09
Requested 2018-09-20
Authors Ian Farrer , Qi Sun , Yong Cui , Linhui Sun
I-D last updated 2018-10-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Brian Weis (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn B. Davies
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-10-04
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2018-10-04
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11

Summary:
Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There are a
couple of remaining trivial nits.

Major issues:
None.

Minor issues:
None.

Nits/editorial comments:
S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/

s10:  I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made
(sorry): OLD: in the table at
https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes
table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS