Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue-05
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue-05-opsdir-lc-hares-2017-02-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-02-09
Requested 2017-01-26
Authors Tianxiang Li , Cong Liu , Yong Cui
I-D last updated 2017-05-31 (Latest revision 2017-03-31)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 06)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-02-15
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue-05-opsdir-lc-hares-2017-02-15-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These 
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the 
IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews 
during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments 
just like any other last call comments.

Status: Ready with editorial nits

General comment: Thank for a draft which is easily read. 

Editorial nit: 

Page 3 section 3.1 section under problem.  Second paragraph.  Second sentence 

The best way to assure a completely new delegated prefix is to send a new IAID in the IA_PD. 

IAID – abbreviation has not been indicated prior to this use 

Old:/IAID/
New: /IAID (IA_PD unique identifier)/

Susan Hares