Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues-11
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues-11-genart-lc-even-2015-02-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-03-04 | |
| Requested | 2015-02-25 | |
| Authors | Ole Trøan , Bernie Volz , Marcin Siodelski | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-02-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Roni Even
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Dan Harkins (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2015-02-28 |
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues-11-genart-lc-even-2015-02-28-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-stateful-issues-11 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015–2-28 IETF LC End Date: 2015–3-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Standard Track RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: The document defines the terms “Identity association (IA)” and “IA option types” different from RFC3315 yet in the document sometimes this terms are as specified in RFC3315 including the IA_TA option. An example is for section with text changes. For clarification: Is this document going to be obsolete by draft-dhcwg-dhc-rfc3315bis, there are some sections that include changes to RFC3315 and RFC3633 and my reading is that this changes will be incorporated un the rfc3315bis draft. I am not sure about sections that provides clarifications and do not propose text changes.