Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24-opsdir-lc-liu-2021-11-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-11-15
Requested 2021-10-25
Authors Ian Farrer
I-D last updated 2021-11-18
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -19 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -24 by Will (Shucheng) LIU (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -23 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Yangdoctors Telechat review of -24 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Will (Shucheng) LIU
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/hatZZx8PG5pd0OIXiCDMQZATtu4
Reviewed revision 24 (document currently at 25)
Result Has nits
Completed 2021-11-18
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24-opsdir-lc-liu-2021-11-18-00
Hi all,

I have reviewed draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24 as part of the Operational
directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by
the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last
call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

“This document describes YANG data modules for the configuration and
   management of DHCPv6 (Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol for IPv6
   RFC8415) servers, relays, and clients.”

My overall view of the document is 'Has Nits'.

** Technical **

Page54,
1. The DHCPv6 server may be bound to an interface to specify the DHCPv6 address
pool of the corresponding interface. 2. The key of container address-pools and
container prefix-pools in the DHCPv6 server may be changed to pool-name.

** Editorial **

No.

Regards,
Will (Shucheng LIU)