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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06
review-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06-genart-lc-even-2020-05-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-05-19
Requested 2020-05-05
Authors Bernie Volz , Tomek Mrugalski , Carlos J. Bernardos
Draft last updated 2020-05-11
Completed reviews Intdir Last Call review of -06 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -06 by Jaime Jimenez (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -06 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Sean Turner (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06-genart-lc-even-2020-05-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/qgxXlaKO5Z7cXcYoesC57JSli7c
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2020-05-11
review-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06-genart-lc-even-2020-05-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-05-11
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. In the terminology section I was wondering why the client is a device while
the server is a software. Any reason for this distinction.

2. The server can allocate a smaller size chunk and not the requested size. The
allocation policy is up to the server. Should it be required from the server to
allocate the largest chunk that is closer to the requested size.