Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06
review-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-05-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-05-19
Requested 2020-05-05
Authors Bernie Volz, Tomek Mrugalski, Carlos Bernardos
Draft last updated 2020-05-19
Completed reviews Intdir Last Call review of -06 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -06 by Jaime Jimenez (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -06 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-05-19
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/stOeWK0BSe7zPGs7CAh90NeOPIY
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-05-19

Review
review-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-05-19

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes mechanisms for assigning link layer addresses by using DHCPv6 extension. I do not find any major issue from the OPS point of view, I think this doc is ready for publication as RFC.

One suggestion on the proposed IA_LL and LLADDR options. It's better to extend and describe the acronyms as early as possible.

Cheers,
Tianran