Early Review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2013-12-09 | |
Requested | 2013-11-15 | |
Authors | David Hankins , Tomek Mrugalski , Marcin Siodelski , Sheng Jiang , Suresh Krishnan | |
I-D last updated | 2013-12-09 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -14
by Joel M. Halpern
(diff)
Opsdir Early review of -14 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 17) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2013-12-09 |
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00
Dear all, This is for tool tracking purpose to repost the early review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14 in October. The document is not perfect editorially -- some repetitiousness, but no point trying to rewrite it at this stage -- but has a lot of good information. It should move forward. A couple of specific typos: Sec. 19, para 4 first line: "cannot not" -> "cannot" Sec. 22, para 1 second line: "exist" -> "existing" Thank you, Tina