Early Review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2013-12-09 | |
| Requested | 2013-11-15 | |
| Authors | David Hankins , Tomek Mrugalski , Marcin Siodelski , Sheng Jiang , Suresh Krishnan | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-12-09 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -14
by
Joel M. Halpern
(diff)
Opsdir Early review of -14 by Tina Tsou (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tina Tsou |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09
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| Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 17) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2013-12-09 |
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00
Dear all, This is for tool tracking purpose to repost the early review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14 in October. The document is not perfect editorially -- some repetitiousness, but no point trying to rewrite it at this stage -- but has a lot of good information. It should move forward. A couple of specific typos: Sec. 19, para 4 first line: "cannot not" -> "cannot" Sec. 22, para 1 second line: "exist" -> "existing" Thank you, Tina