Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11
review-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11-genart-lc-campbell-2013-01-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-07
Requested 2013-01-03
Authors Bharat Joshi , D.T.V. Ramakrishna Rao , Mark Stapp
I-D last updated 2013-01-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Dan Harkins
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-01-03
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-01-03
IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10

Summary:  Ready for publication as a proposed standard.

Note: This review is incremental to my previous Gen-ART review at IETF last
call. The only substantive comment from that review has been addressed in
discussion. There are two remaining trivial editorial comments that the authors
have agreed to address. Since there has not been an update since that previous
review, I am including them for the sake of documentation. ** Nothing there is
important enough to delay publication. **

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

[section copied from previous review]

> -- section 5, last paragraph:
>
> I suggest removing the scare quotes around "stability". If there are concerns
about whether such stability is real, it would be better to say that directly.
> > -- informative references: > > draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv4-bulk-leasequery-06 is
now 07