Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07-opsdir-lc-banks-2016-06-02-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2016-05-23 | |
| Requested | 2016-05-09 | |
| Authors | Ted Lemon , Tomek Mrugalski | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-06-02 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -08
by
Joel M. Halpern
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Yaron Sheffer (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Yaron Sheffer Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Sarah Banks (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Russ White (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Sarah Banks |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07-opsdir-lc-banks-2016-06-02
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| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2016-06-02 |
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07-opsdir-lc-banks-2016-06-02-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-lemon-dhc-topo-conf Summary: An informational draft describing how DHCP servers are deployed/used "today", which extends beyond the information that's described in the DHCPv4/DHCPv6 RFCs themselves. Status: Ready This draft is well written, straight forward, and ready for publication. Thanks Sarah