Early Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-08
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-08-rtgdir-early-white-2016-05-27-00

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​

http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-08
Reviewer: Russ White
Review Date: 27 May 2016
IETF LC End Date: 23 May 2016
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:
No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:
This is a very useful draft for informational state. Overall, the draft is well
written, the diagrams are helpful, and the references look correct.

Major Issues:
None found

Minor Issues:
None found

Nits:

It is important to understand the background of how DHCP works when considering
those diagrams. Those/these

The relay agent that receives client’s message sets giaddr field to the
address... Either remove "field" after giaddr or add "the" before giaddr

I found one or two more really minor nits, but didn't write them down, and now
can't find them again. Generally, though, the quality of this document is very
high, and all nits are very minor.

:-)

Russ