Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09-secdir-telechat-sheffer-2016-08-04-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2016-08-02 | |
Requested | 2016-07-14 | |
Authors | Ted Lemon , Tomek Mrugalski | |
I-D last updated | 2016-08-04 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -08
by Joel M. Halpern
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Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Yaron Sheffer (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Yaron Sheffer Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Sarah Banks (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Russ White (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Yaron Sheffer |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 09 | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2016-08-04 |
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09-secdir-telechat-sheffer-2016-08-04-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document describes current practices for configuring DHCP in complex network scenarios, where the goal is to allow servers to configure DHCP clients differently depending on the client's network location. Summary The document is ready for publication. Details My previous SecDir review of -08 lamented the then short and essentially useless Security Considerations section. This section has now been significantly extended and as far as I can determine, is now at an appropriate level for this draft. I would like to thank the authors for addressing my comments!