Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dime-diameter-api-
review-ietf-dime-diameter-api-secdir-telechat-turner-2009-06-16-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dime-diameter-api |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2009-06-16 | |
Requested | 2009-06-13 | |
Authors | Victor Fajardo , Pat Calhoun , David Frascone | |
I-D last updated | 2009-06-16 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Sean Turner
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Sean Turner |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Sean Turner |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-dime-diameter-api by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Completed | 2009-06-16 |
review-ietf-dime-diameter-api-secdir-telechat-turner-2009-06-16-00
I have reviewed this document (twice now) as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This version does not address the comments I made against the -07 version, notably: The document needs to discuss the security considerations surrounding the API in your document, as opposed to just pointing to RFC5388. Nits: - Sec 3.1.1: add "." to end of last sentence - Sec 3.4.3.1 and 3.4.3.2: r/- The NAI of the user./The NAI of the user. - Sec 3.4.5.7: Move description before C code. spt