Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dime-ovli-09
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Document: draft-ietf-dime-ovli-09.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2015/08/19
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2015/08/20



Summary: Ready. Thanks for addressing my last call comments (except one 


minor change got missed - see below).  A good document.  [Apologies for 


somewhat late review - in inter-continental airport limbo.]




Major issues:
None

Minor issues:


s4.2:  I commented on the possibility of turning off an abatement 


algorithm at last call.   Having thought this through, I assume that in 


general it would be sufficient for a reacting node to stop announcing 


its capability.  If this is correct it might be worth mentioning this 


(as with changing presumably this would be an exceptional case but could 


happen).  I don't think that anything very special would have to be done 


with stateful algorithms but maybe a comment would help.




Nits/editorial comments:


s5.2.1.1:  Adding a pointer to s7.3 was discussed and agreed but hasn't 


happened.



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