Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
review-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13-genart-lc-kyzivat-2019-10-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-10-14
Requested 2019-09-30
Authors Anthony Chan , Xinpeng Wei , Jong-Hyouk Lee , Seil Jeon , Carlos J. Bernardos
I-D last updated 2019-10-12
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -13 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Qin Wu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -14 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -14 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/IKM6BVdC3BUb5G68RVx4V6sZyHg
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2019-10-12
review-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13-genart-lc-kyzivat-2019-10-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-10-12
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

General:

I found that I lack the subject matter expertise to meaningfully review 
this document. I read it carefully, along with one of the references. 
But it appeared that I would need to internalize quite a number of other 
references before it would be possible to really follow this.

I did review it for form - the document is well written. (Most documents 
that I review have at least a few problems with form.)

IdNits returns a couple of outdated references that should be cleaned up:

   == Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of
      draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-17

   == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
      draft-ietf-rtgwg-atn-bgp-01

I have no other comments.