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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-05

Request Review of draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-10
Requested 2017-01-27
Authors Zhiwei Yan , Jong-Hyouk Lee , XiaoDong Lee
I-D last updated 2017-02-17
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -03 by Jean-Michel Combes (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tim Chown (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2017-02-17
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Document: draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-05
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-02-10
IETF LC End Date:   2017-02-10
IESG Telechat date: -

This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
"However, the current PMIPv6 specification does not specify related operations
when an HNP renumbering is happened.". Suggestion for more clarity: "However,
the current PMIPv6 specification does not specify related operations when an
HNP renumbering has happened (e.g. due to change of service provider, change of
site topology, etc.).". -[Page 3], "to an MAG"---->"to a MAG"

-[Page 7], "the proceduer"--->"the procedure"

Best Regards,
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research