Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
review-ietf-dmm-requirements-15-genart-telechat-housley-2014-08-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dmm-requirements
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-03-25
Requested 2014-03-06
Authors Anthony Chan , Dapeng Liu , Pierrick Seite , Hidetoshi Yokota , Jouni Korhonen
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2014-06-05)
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -15 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -15 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-dmm-requirements by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-08-21
review-ietf-dmm-requirements-15-genart-telechat-housley-2014-08-21-00
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2014-03-21
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-17
IESG Telechat date: Unknown (to me anyway)

Summary:  Ready for publication.


Major Concerns:  None.


Minor Concerns:  None.


Other Comments:

Thanks for addressing my comments on -14.

In section 1, the document says: "... the EPC Evolved Packet
Core (EPC) [TS.29303]."  You should drop the first "EPC ".