Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
review-ietf-dmm-requirements-15-genart-telechat-housley-2014-08-21-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dmm-requirements |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-03-25 | |
| Requested | 2014-03-06 | |
| Authors | Anthony Chan , Dapeng Liu , Pierrick Seite , Hidetoshi Yokota , Jouni Korhonen | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-08-21 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -15
by
Russ Housley
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Catherine Meadows (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -15 by Catherine Meadows (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-dmm-requirements-15-genart-telechat-housley-2014-08-21
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| Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 17) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2014-08-21 |
review-ietf-dmm-requirements-15-genart-telechat-housley-2014-08-21-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2014-03-21 IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-17 IESG Telechat date: Unknown (to me anyway) Summary: Ready for publication. Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: None. Other Comments: Thanks for addressing my comments on -14. In section 1, the document says: "... the EPC Evolved Packet Core (EPC) [TS.29303]." You should drop the first "EPC ".