Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07
review-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2020-03-01-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2020-02-28 | |
| Requested | 2020-02-14 | |
| Authors | Warren "Ace" Kumari , Paul E. Hoffman | |
| Draft last updated | 2020-03-01 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -07
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Jouni Korhonen
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Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Genart Last Call review of -07 by Ines Robles (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jouni Korhonen |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2020-03-01
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/Bicvn2R-L9zOyH6CZ97_U58VF6E | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2020-03-01 |
review-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2020-03-01-00
I found the document ready for publication as an Informational RFC. I do have a couple of minor editorial nits: 1) Abstract does not mention this document updates RFC 7706. 2) Since use of AXFR and NOTIFY is mentioned and actually seems to be assumed in multiple places in the draft I would add an appropriate reference to RFC 5936. 3) The draft has multiple IP address and domain name examples that are not according to reserved IP addresses or domain names for documentation. However, due to nature of this document it might be OK to keep the IP addresses and domain names as they are now in the draft.