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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07
review-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2020-03-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-02-28
Requested 2020-02-14
Authors Warren "Ace" Kumari , Paul E. Hoffman
Draft last updated 2020-03-01
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Ines Robles (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2020-03-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/Bicvn2R-L9zOyH6CZ97_U58VF6E
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 12)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2020-03-01
review-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2020-03-01-00
I found the document ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

I do have a couple of minor editorial nits:
1) Abstract does not mention this document updates RFC 7706.
2) Since use of AXFR and NOTIFY is mentioned and actually seems to be assumed
in multiple places in the draft I would add an appropriate reference to RFC
5936. 3) The draft has multiple IP address and domain name examples that are
not according to reserved IP addresses or domain names for documentation.
However, due to nature of this document it might be OK to keep the IP addresses
and domain names as they are now in the draft.