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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22
review-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22-artart-lc-leiba-2023-03-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2023-04-10
Requested 2023-03-13
Authors Warren "Ace" Kumari , Paul E. Hoffman
I-D last updated 2023-03-14
Completed reviews Dnsdir Telechat review of -23 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -22 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -22 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -22 by Niclas Comstedt (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -22 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -22 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Barry Leiba
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22-artart-lc-leiba-2023-03-14
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/UlmVsQTqJWbetEPbQAvQVBB951c
Reviewed revision 22 (document currently at 25)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-03-14
review-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22-artart-lc-leiba-2023-03-14-00
Thanks for a clear, concise, and, if I may say, valuable document.  I couldn't
even find any typos.

I have two very minor comments, both of which can be ignored if you prefer:

1. In Section 4, you use "somename.alt" -- was that chosen over "example.alt"
for a particular reason?  If so, carry on.  If not, maybe consider switching?

2. I would promote RFC 8244 to a normative reference.  I realize that one can
make a reasonable argument both ways, so no big thing either way.

--
Barry