Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22
review-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22-genart-lc-sarikaya-2023-03-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-04-10
Requested 2023-03-13
Authors Warren Kumari , Paul E. Hoffman
I-D last updated 2023-09-14 (Latest revision 2023-05-04)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Telechat review of -23 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -22 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -22 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -22 by Niclas Comstedt (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -22 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -22 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Behcet Sarikaya
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/1LB6_ujGseyZRWPgTQZrP2pS8zk
Reviewed revision 22 (document currently at 25)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-03-28
review-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22-genart-lc-sarikaya-2023-03-28-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-??
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2023-03-28
IETF LC End Date: 2023-04-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:Ready

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
a) I managed to find in this well written document one typo:

Section 6

we would like to
   sincerely apolgized for anyone who we forgot to credit

apologize
b) Lack of an example .alt TLD as indicated in the Artart LC Review. I wonder
if this is due to maybe there will be none.