Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13
review-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13-genart-lc-kline-2018-09-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-09-25
Requested 2018-09-11
Authors Dave Crocker
Draft last updated 2018-09-26
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Roman Danyliw (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Erik Kline (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Erik Kline 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13-genart-lc-kline-2018-09-26
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-09-26

Review
review-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13-genart-lc-kline-2018-09-26

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13
Reviewer: Erik Kline
Review Date: 2018-09-26
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments: just a few things that look like they may be typos

Section 2:  "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me.  "DNS node names" perhaps?

Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/?

Section 5: s/in the of/in the/?