Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13
review-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13-genart-lc-kline-2018-09-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-09-25 | |
| Requested | 2018-09-11 | |
| Authors | Dave Crocker | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-09-26 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -13
by Roman Danyliw
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Erik Kline (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Erik Kline |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 16) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-09-26 |
review-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13-genart-lc-kline-2018-09-26-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13 Reviewer: Erik Kline Review Date: 2018-09-26 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-25 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: just a few things that look like they may be typos Section 2: "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me. "DNS node names" perhaps? Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/? Section 5: s/in the of/in the/?