IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency-09
review-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency-09-genart-lc-gurbani-2025-10-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2025-10-29
Requested 2025-10-15
Authors Peter Thomassen
I-D last updated 2025-12-15 (Latest revision 2025-12-11)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -03 by David Blacka (diff)
Secdir Early review of -04 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Dnsdir Early review of -05 by Patrick Mevzek (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by David Blacka (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/eDQg5Z6Ot_Dbkv2xMwDJ1Xzim9A
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-10-15
review-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency-09-genart-lc-gurbani-2025-10-15-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency-09
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2025-10-15
IETF LC End Date: 2025-10-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This I-D is ready to be published as a Standards Track RFC.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 3
- Abstract: s/parent-side entities has to/parent-side entities have to/ OR
s/parent-side entities has to/parent-side entity has to/ - Abstract:
s/nameservers, before/nameservers before/ - Section 1: s/works fine when all is
in order./works well under normal operating scenarios./