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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09-genart-lc-davies-2020-09-12-02

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-09-14
Requested 2020-08-31
Authors Duane Wessels , Piet Barber , Matt Weinberg , Warren "Ace" Kumari , Wes Hardaker
Draft last updated 2020-09-12
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn B. Davies
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09-genart-lc-davies-2020-09-12
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/d3lKqT5RAcotzxpabG3VHy21u-o
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2020-09-12
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09-genart-lc-davies-2020-09-12-02
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2020-09-12
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with a few minor nits.  Apologies for truncated versions - some
strange effect caused by changing tabs in a Chrome browser that sent the
incomplete review before I was ready.

Major Issues
None

Minor Issues:
s2.3:  The example of the presenation format shown in s2.4 has the sequence of
hex digits representing the Digest surrounded in parentheses.  This is not
specified in s2.3.  Which is right?

Nits and Editorial:

s1, para 2: s/verification the zone as a whole/verification of the zone as a
whole/

s1.1, last para: s/aka AXFR SIG/identified as the AXFR SIG/

s3.1, para 4:  I think this should be RECOMMENDED.

s9:  I have a suspiscion that you mean David Black rather than David Blacka.