Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04
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Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-09-16
Requested 2021-09-02
Authors Paul E. Hoffman
I-D last updated 2021-09-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn B. Davies
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-09-20
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2021-09-20
IETF LC End Date: 2021-09-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with minor nits.

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract: The longer names of DS and NSEC3 should probably be included:  Viz, 
delegation signer (DS)  and authenticated denial of existence version 3 (NSEC3).