Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-chain-query-05
review-ietf-dnsop-edns-chain-query-05-secdir-lc-atkins-2016-02-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-chain-query
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-02-16
Requested 2016-01-07
Authors Paul Wouters
I-D last updated 2016-02-25
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Derek Atkins
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-chain-query by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-02-25
review-ietf-dnsop-edns-chain-query-05-secdir-lc-atkins-2016-02-25-00
Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving
security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts.  Comments
not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the
IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary:

Probably ready to publish

Details:

I noticed that this draft has RFC2119 MUST/MUST NOT directives in the
Security Considerations section.  However this is not a repetition of
similar language elsewhere in the draft.  Is this allowed?  There is
also similar 2119 language in the Introduction.

-derek
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