Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06
review-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06-genart-telechat-housley-2016-02-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-01-19
Requested 2016-01-04
Authors Carlo Contavalli, Wilmer van der Gaast, David Lawrence, Warren Kumari
Draft last updated 2016-02-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06-genart-telechat-housley-2016-02-22
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2016-02-22

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2016-01-15
IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-21
IESG Telechat date: 2016-01-21

Thank you for addressing my earlier comments on -04 of this document.

Summary:  Ready


Major Concerns:  None.


Minor Concern:

In Section 6, I think it would be useful to say that the SCOPE
PREFIX-LENGTH in a response MUST be less than or equal to the SOURCE
PREFIX-LENGTH from the request.


Editorial Suggestions:

In Section 7.3, last paragraph, last sentence, I think that "should"
ought to be in all capital letters.

In Section 7.4, fourth paragraph, last sentence, I think that
"recommended" ought to be in all capital letters.