Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06
review-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06-genart-telechat-housley-2016-02-22-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-01-19 | |
Requested | 2016-01-04 | |
Authors | Carlo Contavalli , Wilmer van der Gaast , David C Lawrence , Warren "Ace" Kumari | |
I-D last updated | 2016-02-22 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Russ Housley
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Russ Housley (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready w/issues | |
Completed | 2016-02-22 |
review-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06-genart-telechat-housley-2016-02-22-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2016-01-15 IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-21 IESG Telechat date: 2016-01-21 Thank you for addressing my earlier comments on -04 of this document. Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concern: In Section 6, I think it would be useful to say that the SCOPE PREFIX-LENGTH in a response MUST be less than or equal to the SOURCE PREFIX-LENGTH from the request. Editorial Suggestions: In Section 7.3, last paragraph, last sentence, I think that "should" ought to be in all capital letters. In Section 7.4, fourth paragraph, last sentence, I think that "recommended" ought to be in all capital letters.