Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-05
review-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-05-dnsdir-lc-leymann-2025-01-21-00

Hi,

I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs.
For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see
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There was an extensive early review for the document:

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/PxPDGSbOIPpX320CwTLdEZHlvho/

Summary:
  The draft extends the use of DNS NOTIFY which is described in RFC1996.
  it received significant discussion on the mailing list based on the
  early review and the authors took care of all comments and updated 
  the document accordingly. 

  All  issues raised during the first review and on the mailing list
  were addressed. Overall I think the document is ready to be moved 
  to the next step - thanks  for the good work and thanks for listening 
  to the feedback from the working group.

Nits:
  4.1: "the notification sender MUST perform the following
   procedure:", the following description refers to steps, for consistency 
   it might be better to rephrase as "... perform the following steps".
  4.1: "and another query for city.ise.mie._dsync.jp is then required;"
    Should be a "." instead of a ";".
  6.2: "RRtype  Lists an RRtype that is defined for use.", usage of "." not 
    consistent in the list.
  8: "." at end of list missing.