Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-05
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Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2025-02-06
Requested 2025-01-23
Authors Johan Stenstam , Peter Thomassen , John R. Levine
I-D last updated 2025-02-03
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -01 by Patrick Mevzek (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -05 by Nicolai Leymann (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Giuseppe Fioccola (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -07 by Peter van Dijk (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Tony Li (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Giuseppe Fioccola
State Completed
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Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/JbDkEdkrMnZwxyPrZCZZeDhnARc
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 09)
Result Has nits
Completed 2025-02-03
review-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-05-opsdir-lc-fioccola-2025-02-03-00
This document extends the use of DNS NOTIFY which is described in RFC 1996. It
is well written and clear for its scope, but I have few suggestions.

I think that Appendix A on "Efficiency and Convergence Issues in DNS Scanning"
is quite relevant to understand the use cases that this document aims to
address, and therefore, it could be moved earlier in this document, e.g. as a
subsection of the Introduction.

I would add a sentence at the beginning of section 2 on "DSYNC RR Type" just to
introduce what is defined in this section, i.e. a new RR TYPE for endpoint
discovery.

From an OPSDIR point of view, I noticed that some references about the
deployment are provided in section 7 on "Implementation Status". Since this
section is supposed to be removed before publication, I would rather keep it
and summarize the main results of the implementation especially with regards to
interoperability and backwards compatibility aspects.