Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-06
review-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-06-opsdir-telechat-li-2025-02-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2025-03-04
Requested 2025-01-23
Authors Johan Stenstam , Peter Thomassen , John R. Levine
I-D last updated 2025-09-28 (Latest revision 2025-03-19)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -01 by Patrick Mevzek (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Nicolai Leymann (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Giuseppe Fioccola (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -07 by Peter van Dijk (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Tony Li (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tony Li
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/5cu69UItlt9-AaRsR353VNT1EoA
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Has nits
Completed 2025-02-20
review-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-06-opsdir-telechat-li-2025-02-20-00
OPSDIR review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-06

Reviewer: Tony Li

Disclaimer: I am not a DNS expert and I do not play one on TV. I have
not helped with DNS operations since the 1980's. I am not up to speed
on DNSsec. I'm sorry, but I cannot devote the time necessary to do all
of the background reading that is outlined in Section 1.

Overall: Ready, with nits

Section 3.2:

	It is also possible to publish child-specific records, where
	in place of the wildcard label, the child's FQDN with the
	parent zone's labels stripped is used.

Please reword.