Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
review-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00-genart-lc-halpern-2015-07-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 01)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-08-11
Requested 2015-07-16
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -00 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -00 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Joel Halpern
Review review-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00-genart-lc-halpern-2015-07-18
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg11975.html
Reviewed rev. 00 (document currently at 01)
Review result Almost Ready
Draft last updated 2015-07-18
Review completed: 2015-07-18

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
    The .onion Special-Use Domain Name
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 18-July-2015
IETF LC End Date: 11-August-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A



Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed 


Standard RFC






Major issues: It seems to this reviewer that at least the definition of 


how to use these names, reference tor-rendezvous, needs to be a 


normative reference.  It appears likely that tor-address also ought to 


be a normative reference.






Minor issues:  It is not clear that a github reference without version 


identification is sufficiently stable for a normative reference from an RFC.




Nits/editorial comments: