Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
review-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00-genart-lc-halpern-2015-07-18-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 01) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-08-11 | |
Requested | 2015-07-16 | |
Authors | Jacob Appelbaum , Alec Muffett | |
I-D last updated | 2015-07-18 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -00
by Joel M. Halpern
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -00 by Christian Huitema (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -00 by Tom Taylor (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 00 (document currently at 01) | |
Result | Almost ready | |
Completed | 2015-07-18 |
review-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00-genart-lc-halpern-2015-07-18-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00 The .onion Special-Use Domain Name Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 18-July-2015 IETF LC End Date: 11-August-2015 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC Major issues: It seems to this reviewer that at least the definition of how to use these names, reference tor-rendezvous, needs to be a normative reference. It appears likely that tor-address also ought to be a normative reference. Minor issues: It is not clear that a github reference without version identification is sufficiently stable for a normative reference from an RFC. Nits/editorial comments: