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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10
review-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-06-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 20)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-06-25
Requested 2018-06-11
Authors Ray Bellis , Stuart Cheshire , John Dickinson , Sara Dickinson , Ted Lemon , Tom Pusateri
I-D last updated 2018-06-25
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shwetha Bhandari
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 20)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-06-25
review-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10-opsdir-lc-bhandari-2018-06-25-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Reviewer: Shwetha Bhandari
Review result: Ready

This document defines new DNS Stateful Operations(DSO) messages with TLV syntax
to communicate operations within persistent DNS stateful sessions i.e. DNS over
TCP or DNS over TLS/TCP.  The DSO messages with TLVs are extensible for new
operations in future.

The document meets the Operations and Management Review Checklist -
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5706#appendix-A. There is no
operational/manageability consideration section included  in the document,
however the proposed extension does not have a significant operational impact
on the network.