IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-structured-dns-error-15
review-ietf-dnsop-structured-dns-error-15-genart-lc-bryant-2025-05-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-structured-dns-error
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2025-04-28
Requested 2025-04-14
Authors Dan Wing , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Neil Cook , Mohamed Boucadair
I-D last updated 2025-11-06 (Latest revision 2025-05-05)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -03 by Matt Brown (diff)
Dnsdir Early review of -03 by Di Ma (diff)
Secdir Early review of -03 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Matt Brown (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -15 by Stewart Bryant
Artart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Tim Chown
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -13 by Di Ma (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-structured-dns-error by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/CJ7Aj4a91slxO0MSzwdCXOx4390
Reviewed revision 15
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2025-05-12
review-ietf-dnsop-structured-dns-error-15-genart-lc-bryant-2025-05-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-structured-dns-error-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2025-05-12
IETF LC End Date: 2025-04-28
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:From a GenART perspective this is a well written text with just a
couple of minor comments at a NITs level.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

SB> ID Nits picks up the following which should be addressed at some point.

  == There is 1 instance of lines with non-ascii characters in the document.

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  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 4949
SB> For info this is in the downref registry and is OK. Perhaps the tools team
could be asked to make this check automatically to avoid reviewers needing to
manually check.
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  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7159 (Obsoleted by RFC 8259)

SB> I am not sure why RFC 7159 is listed as normative as it is only used as in
a narrative explanation of document history