Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-08-13
Requested 2018-07-30
Authors Paul Hoffman, Andrew Sullivan, Kazunori Fujiwara
Draft last updated 2018-08-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -12 by Allison Mankin (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -13 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-11-genart-lc-even-2018-08-08
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-08-08


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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-08-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  In section 2 the term DNAME is mentioned and while CNAME is specified DNAME is not (maybe reference RFC6672?)

2. In section 5 "Most resorece record " typo.

3. This is more a comment and since I did not follow the progress of the document I am not sure the motivation here. Reading the text I noticed that in the definition of referrals in section 4 the text include also what looks to me like logic starting from the third paragraph. I was wondering why is it here and not in one of the standard track documents and referenced here. I saw that this is a big change from RFC7719.