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IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-multi-qtypes-11
review-ietf-dnssd-multi-qtypes-11-artart-lc-leiba-2025-12-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-multi-qtypes
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2026-01-02
Requested 2025-12-12
Authors Ray Bellis
I-D last updated 2026-03-06 (Latest revision 2026-02-27)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -06 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Barry Leiba
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnssd-multi-qtypes by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/NtjB0LH8feC9TxyV3w5dns4aM1M
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-12-18
review-ietf-dnssd-multi-qtypes-11-artart-lc-leiba-2025-12-18-00
Thanks for a clear document specifying a useful extension.  And the appendix of
examples is a great help.  I think the draft is ready for approval.

I do find myself wishing that Section 3.3 had been done as a bullet list to
avoid repetition, somewhat like this:

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   The server MUST return a FORMERR response in any of these conditions:
      * an MQTYPE-Query option is received in any inbound DNS message with
         an OpCode other than QUERY (0)
      * an MQTYPE-Response option is received in any inbound DNS message
      * more than one MQTYPE-Query option is received in a query
      * ...etc…
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But this is a style preference, and I don’t expect nor ask for changes at this
stage.  Carry on.