Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
review-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04-genart-lc-campbell-2014-12-23-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-01-07 | |
| Requested | 2014-12-19 | |
| Authors | Kerry Lynn , Stuart Cheshire , Marc Blanchet , Daniel Migault | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-12-23 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by
Ben Campbell
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Sheng Jiang (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Ben Campbell |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04-genart-lc-campbell-2014-12-23
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| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready with Issues | |
| Completed | 2014-12-23 |
review-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04-genart-lc-campbell-2014-12-23-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2014-12-22 IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC. Its well written and easy to understand. Major issues: None Minor issues: The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you to change it at this point in the process. :-) Nits/editorial comments: -- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references. -- REQ2: Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in zero configuration mode?