Telechat Review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13
review-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-08-14-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-08-14 | |
| Requested | 2018-08-08 | |
| Authors | Paul E. Hoffman , Patrick McManus | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-08-14 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -12
by
Stewart Bryant
(diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -13 by Fernando Gont (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Magnus Nystrom (diff) Genart Telechat review of -13 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Stewart Bryant |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-08-14
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| Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 14) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2018-08-14 |
review-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-08-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2018-08-14 IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-08 IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-16 Summary: This is useful work, it is well written and is ready for publication Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I accept that I am going to be in the rough, but I do not like the term "on the wire". My recollection from my hardware days is that the output shift register sends the data in such a way that if I were to put an oscilloscope on the wire, the bit patterns would not match those shown in this text. What I think are presented in the text are raw RFC1035 messages in network byte order.